Wednesday, October 31, 2007

An Interview With Alan Gratz

As part of our ongoing series of interviews today I am featuring author Alan Gratz. His book Samurai Shortstop hit the shelves last year with great success and he has recently launched his latest YA, Something Rotten. This book is a new twist on Shakespeare's Hamlet set in modern times in a small town. "A stinking-rich family. A reeking paperplant. A murder most foul. Something isdefinitely rotten in Denmark, Tennessee,and only 17-year-old detective Horatio Wilkes can sniff out the killer."

Sounds intriguing! Let's ask Alan some questions, shall we?

KL - I attended your appearance at the View From Tuesday Evening at Quail Ridge Books and Music in Raleigh and I found your manner to be engaging and your topics very thought provoking.

AG - Thanks! Once you've taught middle schoolers, there's no crowd you can't handle. :-)

KL - You hate doing research but have been forced to come to terms with it and embrace it because of the subject matter and settings of the books you've been writing. Can you explain what writing life was like before you embraced research and how knuckling down and doing it has changed your writing?

AG - Before I embraced research, I simply picked projects that didn't “require” any research. I was too lazy. Or, perhaps better put, I lacked discipline. That's not to say that only writers of historical fiction are disciplined. Once I learned to be a more disciplined writer, I looked back at “all” the writing I'd been doing, historical and otherwise, and realized I could be applying more disciplined techniques to everything I'd been writing. There was a “reason” Samurai Shortstop was the third book I'd written and yet the first one I'd sold. I was a much better writer then. I'd learned so much. But before Samurai, I couldn't imagine putting in the time and effort that a research project like that would require. Those days were filled with a lot of writers block, a lot of banging my head on the keyboard waiting for the muse to strike. I have a much better handle on those things now.

KL - How do you go about gathering your research and then how do you keep it organized?

AG - I outline everything I do now, historical or otherwise. That helps me keep my story straight, and allows me to deliberately develop themes and repeat symbols and metaphors. When doing a lot of historical research, I spend a few months taking notes, then another month or so outlining my story, and then I move all my research notes, line by line, into my outline. Do I have a chapter set in a Shinto shrine? I move all my notes about Shinto shrines to that outline page. Do I have a scene where a doctor explains dioxin poisoning? I move all my notes about dioxin and its effects to that page of my outline. Now, instead of sitting down to write the first page of a 250 page novel, I turn to the first page of my outline and begin writing the first page of a “seven” page chapter. Now I'm not sifting through an inch of research notes looking for that one detail I need, I'm running down a list that's one, two, maybe three pages at most. And I know all the info I'll need is somewhere in those pages. That's essentially how I conquered my writer's block--by making sure I was always “prepared” to write when I sat down to actually write words and sentences and paragraphs on the page.

KL - You are working on several books at once - how to you manage that?

AG - This is getting more difficult. I've been very fortunate to sell a handful of books on pitches, but now I have to get them all written! At this very moment, I'm on deadline for two books that have to be wrapped up about the same time, by the end of this calendar year. Both books are written and in the revision stage, so while one is back with my editor, I'm working away at the other one. Very soon I'm going to have to “begin” two novels that are both due by the end of next summer. Neither is written or outlined. One of those novels requires a great deal of research, so I'll be splitting my days. Part of my day will be spent reading research books for one novel, and then the second part of the day will be spent outlining and writing the other. I can't “write” two books at the same time--that's just too much for me. But I can research and brainstorm one while writing another. It's actually a nice change of pace during the day. I often get burned out on the writing after seven to ten pages or so, so it's a great way to stay in my office and keep working.

KL - You wore many different writing hats before you became the successful novelist you are now. What things did you do? Were any of your past experiences helpful in forming the writer you are today?

AG - Oh, I did a lot of things to pay the bills, many if not all of which involved writing or literature in some fashion or another. I wrote newsletter copy, created press releases, sold books, wrote radio commercials, taught English to middle school, high school, and university students, and even did some freelance television writing. The number one thing I learned from all the writing work I did was to take editorial criticism. Every person who handled my work wanted me to change it somehow, and I had to learn to put my ego away and make whatever changes were required of me. That attitude became so ingrained that revisions don't drive me crazy. Oh, I still “hate” to do them, and I die a little inside with every editorial letter I get, but I had a lot of practice rewriting, and rewriting, and rewriting “again” on my freelance work, so I just accept this as part of the process now. It was through my freelance work that I learned much of the discipline I would need to write and sell my first novel.

KL - You did 30 school visits last year! What do you typically offer the students when you do a school visit?

AG - I talk about my path to publication, focusing primarily on the research, outlining, and revising phases of my writing. My goal is to pull back the curtain and show kids the reality of a writing life. I knew I wanted to be a writer when I was in middle school, and while I had a great many supportive teachers who taught me how to write, none of them taught me how to make a “living” as a writer. I hope I get through to the two or three aspiring writers in the audience, and at the same time I hope the rest of the students begin to understand the time and energy that go into the books that fill their library shelves.


KL - My twelve year old son attended Alan's talk with me and looked like he was bored out of his mind. But in working on a writing project recently he said "that Writer Guy said if something doesn't appear in the story twice then it needs to get cut". So, Writer Guy - did he get that right? Can you explain that a little further (and bless you for making an impression on my kid).

AG - He was bored? Oh dear. In my defense, it “was” a teacher and librarian program! (MOTHER'S NOTE - I said he acted bored - this is what he does and doesn't necessarily reflect what is actually going on inside his head) But it sounds like he did take something away after all. What he's talking about is some advice I heard the Newbery Award-winning author Linda Sue Park give about how she decides what does and doesn't go into her historical novels. She said that if she couldn't use an element twice in a story she wouldn't use it at all. The example she gave was that in ancient Korea people ate and drank out of hollowed out gourds, and she kept trying to work that detail into her books but she could never make it significant enough to the story to return to it a second time. It took her three books to finally work in that tidbit. The rule works best for historical fiction because it keeps you from throwing in every last bit of research you did, but it's also a great exercise in making everything you put into your stories relevant later on. As long as he understands how to use it, yeah, it's a great piece of advice!

Thanks a bunch Alan!

Read more about Alan on these blogs:
Elizabeth Dulemba
Kim Norman
Kerry Madden

Wednesday, October 24, 2007

A Fondness for Johnny Gruelle



I am finishing off an interview for Stephanie Ruble's blog post interviewing me for Blogging For a Cure. One of her questions asked of a favorite doll from my childhood and I happen to have two of them keeping me company in my studio everyday (they live on a book shelf and these days they're snuggled up to my copy of HP7). Notice if you will the patina of affection on my eldest Raggedy Ann. She was well loved. I remember the day when her button eye chipped although I couldn't have been more than three or four. It was horrifying and the next Christmas Santa brought me a replacement. She doesn't seem nearly as loved as her predecessor but by the time I got her I wasn't using my mouth as my primary means of discovering my world.

I took the ladies out for a photo op with the stack of Raggedy Ann and Andy books that I had as a girl. My mom signed me up for the book of the month club and I still have about eight of these books written and beautifully illustrated by Johnny Gruelle. The copyright dates for these run between 1920 and 1930 on the editions I have (of course I was not alive then - mine have '68 written inside in my mother's handwriting).



This is a spread from Raggedy Ann in the Deep Deep Woods. It would have been one of my earliest contact with illustration - which leads me to a great big Ah-ha! It is still magical - even more than I remembered as a child. He was also a political cartoonist and creator of Twee Deedle for the New York Herald.


Robert's Snow



There is something amazing going on - Blogging for the Cure. These folks took it upon themselves to promote the artists that have donated their hand painted snowflakes for the Robert's Snow: For Cancer's Cure Auction beginning November 19th through December 7th. This grassroots effort was spearheaded by Jules and Eisha of Seven Impossible Things. My Blogger host will be Stephanie Ruble of Sruble's World coming November 1.
Check out Blogging For a Cure everyday to find the list of artist interviews!

Thursday, October 18, 2007

ABC Safari is a Bronze Medalist


ABC Safari has been awarded the Bronze Medal in the category of ABC/counting books by the Independent Publishers Moonbeam Children's Book Awards! I am delighted beyond words.

Monday, October 15, 2007

Lin Oliver at the SCBWI/Carolinas conference part I

Year after year our Carolinas chapter of SCBWI puts on a pretty fantastic fall conference but this year’s Crystal anniversary conference stood out as a rare gem among them. Much hard work went into pulling this all together by our RA Stephanie Greene, ARA Candy Dahl, and the rest of the hard working volunteers. The tone of warmth and energy for the entire weekend was set by our keynote speaker Lin Oliver, co-founder and executive director of SCBWI. Her sense of humor and passion for writing for kids brought a sense of camaraderie, hope, and resolution to her opening speech. I couldn’t possibly capture the electrifying effect of her candid talk but here are my notes for what they are worth.


Lin seems to love a certain degree of structure so here are her eleven steps to becoming the best writer and/or illustrator you can be.

1) The most important element of being a good writer is being a good listener. Eavesdrop wherever you go and whenever you can.

2) Once you have acknowledged yourself as a writer, develop your language skills

3) Put yourself in the company of other writers.

4) Plotting is a skill; practice refines it.

5) All writing is good practice (even blogging)

6) Lin follows the 3 act structure: beginning – middle – end. She also writes in scenes. A new scene always starts after a page turn.

from Wikipedia:
The Three Acts are Beginning, Middle and End (or, more specifically, setup [of the location and characters], confrontation [of the problem], resolution [of the problem]). The first act is generally used to establish the dramatic situation and introduce the main characters. At the end of the first act, an inciting incident complicates the story and moves the screenplay into the second act. The second act, commonly described as "rising action", typically depicts the protagonist attempting to solve the problems caused by the inciting incident. The Climax, which ends the second act, is the scene or sequence in which the main tension and dramatic questions of the story are brought to their most intense point. Finally, the third act features the resolution of the story and its subplots.

7) Read the best of children’s books.

8) A good writer must write from the heart. Write what you wonder about.

9) Cling to your own voice and know that you have one.

10) Synthesize, dig, polish. Then follow your weirdness (a quote from Bruce Coville!)

and finally…

11) Love your characters, love your work.

Lin Oliver at the SCBWI/Carolinas conference II

Lin Oliver’s Writing Effective Dialog workshop. (again with the bullet points)

1) Each character sounds like themselves. (Read aloud the dialog of each character only and listen. Does it sound like it is all coming from one individual?)

2) Each character is distinguishable from the others. (if they all sound alike then they haven’t come to life)

3) Speech should sound natural, unforced and flowing. Develop your ear. People speak illogically, elliptically and emotionally.

4) Back and forth has a rhythm and pacing that is pleasing

5) Suspense is created through dialog

6) Emotion is expressed through good dialog – not adverbs!

What can go wrong?

1) Sounds forced or unnatural

2) Characters all sound alike

3) Monologue, not dialog. Nobody delivers a “butt load” of information in dialog (quote attributed to Cole Elington Baker, Lin’s son).

4) Linear and logical to a fault

Mini tips!

Write elliptically

Only attempt dialect if you really know it and then refrain from over-use of phonetic spelling. A little goes a long way. Using “ze” instead of “the” can give you all the color you need to give your character a German accent.

Use a tag phrase to identify your characters, don’tcha know.

Always read your dialog out loud.

Beware of question marks.

EAVESDROP!

Thursday, October 04, 2007

SCBWI Carolinas conference





It was good - actually it was great! I'm going to type up my notes and post them. Here's a picture from Saturday

That's me with my crit group in the bottom right - explains why my notes aren't very clear.